You. Are not in the big picture. That is the Princess Luna. I do not wish to know where Princess Celestia is. And you are an alicorn. A very magically inclined pony. The future, may as well be.
*thinks for a moment* I...did somepony do this to me? If it's the future then I shouldn't be all little right? Do I really not grow more like Tia said?! Is that what her spell was?! Somepony please TELL MEEEEE!!!
*anticlimactically floats back to the ground really fast as the light disappears almost instantaneously revealing Luna absolutely untouched* Bye Flare! *gasp* my memories! I remember things!!! Yeeesssss!!!!
Long story; I was in the Everfree forest, I found this shiny thing and it was talking to me and said something about a beckoned trance, sideways glance, something like that and I said yes and woke up all weird and-oh look my cutie mark's back!
Well I know Travis owns it now (signed the documents myself) and the old castle is there too and...although I don't want to see it in its disrepair...I also...kind of...used to canter out into the forest a lot...
This is Prince Catastrophe my Alicorn OC, ruler of the Steel Empire which is a far off place. You should know him he went to school with you and Celestia
Yeah...(BTW you are kind of treading on uneven ground in fan-fiction by making not only an alicorn OC, but also making connections with prior characters, but you are lucky since your first installment of fics are all war fics, but, but remember, there are a billion ways to do a war fic wrong, so don't be that pony that messes it up, just some warnings to throw out besides the obvious "don't let them degenerate to Sue's" thing.)
The two princesses knew him when they were young, but then he was forced to move after his family set out for new wonder. About a thousand years has past and they both forgot about him even though they and a few other Alicorns were part of The Rainbow Brigade.(A little group they made) But there is nothing between him or the mane cast. The only one that does that is RD and my OC Razorwing(midnight blue pegasus whose parents were killed in a fire, so only he and his sister survived. But he was hurt so bad his cutie mark was burned and he had his destroyed wings replaced by steel.) It can work
Hmmm, alright, that is acceptable, but only if you execute it near perfectly. Also, if you want it on EqD, then make the first chapter meet their standards. After your story is in, it isn't going any time soon if ever.
Oh OK, my age is...don't tell anypony, you already know it anyways in the [REDACTED] year relation to yours that makes you older than me and younger than Celly...
Hrrmmm. Well now im going to get off to i guess. Nopony seems to wanna talk... Ill just say bye to who i think may still be on: Bye sunset om hover and rainbowdash! Ill turn skype on.
It happened again.....BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
ReplyDeleteIm pretty sure this will be the slowest meeting ever.
ReplyDeleteEeyup.
ReplyDeleteCherryapplekiwipinapplecupcakevodkachimichanga
ReplyDeleteI will not be on for another 30 minutes I have stuff to do
Pinkie should get a Skype too :p
ReplyDeleteTeam cherrychonga!
ReplyDeleteSame~
ReplyDelete*mumble grumble*
ReplyDeleteThis meeting needs to be about... 20% more attended
DeleteWhat? Don't like being on here compared to Skype?
ReplyDeletesigh, that not it. I'm fine.
Delete...can somepony tell me where I am...?
ReplyDelete(-_-) yes I can, you are in the Lunar Cabinet.
Delete...still don't know!
DeleteI see me at the top but...
DeleteYes, but that's not the same pony anymore.
DeleteIs this a... website about Pwincess???
Delete...but...what happened? I look...older...do you know my mom?
DeletePerhaps, and we do not know what happened.
DeleteNo, I mean...well first off, why am I all big in the picture? Do you know where Celly is? Why do I feel all magical and stuff? Is this the future???
DeleteNot again... >(\<
DeleteYou. Are not in the big picture. That is the Princess Luna. I do not wish to know where Princess Celestia is. And you are an alicorn. A very magically inclined pony. The future, may as well be.
Delete*thinks for a moment* I...did somepony do this to me? If it's the future then I shouldn't be all little right? Do I really not grow more like Tia said?! Is that what her spell was?! Somepony please TELL MEEEEE!!!
DeleteYou tell us little one.
Deletem-m-m...*crying*
DeleteHmmm. *walks out of room* I need to gather some... Things...
Delete*throws stuffed pony at Luna's face*
ReplyDeleteHehehehe! *dashes off*
My wittle filly bwain huwts... I've been on the computew fow 5 hours stwaight!
ReplyDeleteThere are many comfortable places around the castle, if you wish to rest.
DeleteYaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Sweepover~ *passes out on a pillow*
DeleteThe Castle? But we aren't in the Everfr-where are we again?!?!?!
DeleteWe're in canterlot castle, your highness.
DeleteLocation is irreverent if it has no meaning to you.
DeleteI wonder do i live in the Castle? If so im going with cloud home made of thunderstorms in a fortress style. Or the Everfree.
DeleteBut...but...I don't even know where that is...I...*whimpering, crying*
DeleteWould ye feel better if i gave you a brushie?
DeleteI...I don't even *sniff* know you...but...you would...please!
Delete*brushie brushies your mane*
Deletewell, i am HoverHoof, your personal servant and advisor. Your wish is my command.
H...HoverHoof...where...I...*erupts into columns of flashing light, floating in the center*
Delete*backs away*
Deleteuh oh, this can't be good
*starts crying out of annoyence*
ReplyDeleteWait. The buck!? I'm the servant!
ReplyDeleteAs a second hoof, i am everything.
Delete*hugs Princess Luna*
ReplyDeleteWell, good night everypony! Have some pony things to do!
See you tomorrow flare!
Delete*anticlimactically floats back to the ground really fast as the light disappears almost instantaneously revealing Luna absolutely untouched* Bye Flare! *gasp* my memories! I remember things!!! Yeeesssss!!!!
DeleteThat was weird.
DeleteWhat happened before?
Long story; I was in the Everfree forest, I found this shiny thing and it was talking to me and said something about a beckoned trance, sideways glance, something like that and I said yes and woke up all weird and-oh look my cutie mark's back!
DeleteB-but... I still don't remembew stuff... wait... the dupwication du- *regains memories too and returns to normal age*
DeleteHow-but-oh right two hour or so spell >/)< I should have used the one on me instead...
Delete...why were you in the forest?
DeleteI...I ran away from Tia...she was being a mean pony...
Delete...to the forest?
DeleteWow.
Well I know Travis owns it now (signed the documents myself) and the old castle is there too and...although I don't want to see it in its disrepair...I also...kind of...used to canter out into the forest a lot...
Delete...whatever. And what is A beckoned trance?
DeleteI think...(oh I can't tell them...second...chance...)
DeleteI mean...*squishes cheeks together adorably*
ReplyDeleteNighty night Fware! *hugs*
ReplyDelete*glares and grumbles*
ReplyDeleteWell that was pointless. Somepony brush me pwease!
ReplyDeleteI only brush the princess.
Delete*looks away to avoid the filly's gaze*
*cries and mane turns to ice blowing a huge artic wind*
ReplyDelete*floats the enchanted brush over her and leaves it to its work*
DeleteSorry! Sorry! Fine, ill brush you too...
DeleteWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
ReplyDelete*brushes mane*
Deletehappy?
*winds instantly stops and mane turns to normal* *smiles and closes eyes*
ReplyDeletePhew...
Delete*keeps brushing*
Test 1 of OC pick
ReplyDeleteUmm...since when were you an alicorn...or...a part of my family...
DeleteHmmm... pic is to far, wish it had the fire mane, no right fire tail, couldn't get yellow right
DeleteThis is Prince Catastrophe my Alicorn OC, ruler of the Steel Empire which is a far off place. You should know him he went to school with you and Celestia
DeleteOh, it is Catastrophe, so you are going to be him for now on?
DeleteYeah, I remember, I called him Cat...twas fun...
DeleteMaybe, if so my Shadowbolt will be gone until i switch back.
DeleteSo ill stick with him unless i change him
Funny you say that, in my fic when you and Celestia meet me for the first time, i call you Lulu and you call me cat.
DeleteIrony youd say that
You should put your sketch in now so the rest of us can get a better idea of what he should really look like.
DeleteYeah...(BTW you are kind of treading on uneven ground in fan-fiction by making not only an alicorn OC, but also making connections with prior characters, but you are lucky since your first installment of fics are all war fics, but, but remember, there are a billion ways to do a war fic wrong, so don't be that pony that messes it up, just some warnings to throw out besides the obvious "don't let them degenerate to Sue's" thing.)
DeleteIn a nut shell
DeleteThe two princesses knew him when they were young, but then he was forced to move after his family set out for new wonder. About a thousand years has past and they both forgot about him even though they and a few other Alicorns were part of The Rainbow Brigade.(A little group they made)
But there is nothing between him or the mane cast. The only one that does that is RD and my OC Razorwing(midnight blue pegasus whose parents were killed in a fire, so only he and his sister survived. But he was hurt so bad his cutie mark was burned and he had his destroyed wings replaced by steel.)
It can work
Hmmm, alright, that is acceptable, but only if you execute it near perfectly. Also, if you want it on EqD, then make the first chapter meet their standards. After your story is in, it isn't going any time soon if ever.
DeleteIt's more than 3,000 words but i wont send it until i get chapter 4 done which is about two months off
DeleteI'll...just...brush myself...this is going to be a different experience...*starts brushing own mane, falls asleep and the brush falls next to her*
ReplyDelete*brushes both fillies with telekinesis*
DeleteWow Travis. That's pretty badflank!
ReplyDeleteNeeds the fire mane and better head, ill just scan a draw of my current sketch and color it
Delete#swag
ReplyDeleteHmmm...I should get my friend to draw some pony shipping for Val. day! Heh heh heh heh
ReplyDelete...I should get myself drawn as I am now-wait NONONONO NONE OF YOU DO THAT I DON'T WANT YOU TO MAKE FUN OF ME WHEN I'M NORMAL!!!
ReplyDeleteWhy so paranoid?
DeleteI...um...your phone call has been disconnected please turn it off and stuff! *starts crinkling tin foil*
DeleteWelp I bored.
ReplyDelete*stops brushing*
DeleteWell escuuUuse me, sprinkles!
KEEP BRUSHING. *mane bursts into flames for a second*
ReplyDelete...I WANT CUDDLES BADLY AND I DON'T KNOW WHY! *starts cuddling Hover*
ReplyDeleteUmm, sure thing, princess
Delete*cuddles and brushes*
@sunset
Alright, thats enough, you cant just keep bossing me around
*goes back to cuddling Hover again, murmuring*
DeleteWelp, im back from tryouts! O,0
ReplyDeleteHi! *starts cuddling Victory*
DeleteO-0
DeleteMe gusta.
Hi luna!
Hey vicky!
DeleteHow did it go?
Did you do good? :D
DeleteHello again Vicky-*ahem* Victory...oh, so you have been lurking about, have you Dashie?
DeleteWell yes... and no. The good news is i COULD have made the team. The part that makes you go daww is i turned them down.
DeleteDaww
DeleteI'm watching some season 1 episodes! Thanks for remembering stuff so I could!
DeleteHey Vic whats up?
DeleteUmm... ok dash. O.0
DeleteI didn't take the posistion because... well...
Practice is late. Specificicly in the field house. 8pm to 10.
*le gasp* You tried out for nothing?? *heart explodes*
DeleteWhat where you trying out?
DeleteNo. I tried out and realized i'd rather spend time with you ponies then show up there everynight...
DeleteAlso hey travis!
I was talking to Luna but... ok Victory.
Delete@travis
DeleteBaseball team. Varsity.
Oh and sorry everypony. I hadn't read all the other posts yet. XD
I wish i could play sports again
Delete*hangs head*
Brohugs travis*
Delete(The rule is two pats)
(brohug)
Delete*curls up in corner and crys while mane turns into ice again*
ReplyDeleteI'm so sowwy...*sniff*
*gets up, hugs* just, be nicer next time, I'm sure he forgives you.
Delete*smiles* you are forgiven.
DeleteNow join us!
*hugs*
ReplyDeleteOkay Pwincess...*mane turns light pink*
*hugs, smiles* Good, now go have fun!
DeleteI would die if I ever got a story on there.
ReplyDeleteAwwww! Vicky yew did that just fo us? *hug*
ReplyDeleteO,0
DeleteAnd printer is currently in use by mom so that drawing will wait another day
ReplyDelete(I hope this isn't pushy or creepy, and you don't have to answer, but how old are you?)
DeleteI think around 1,066
DeleteMy actual age is seventeen
DeleteOh OK, my age is...don't tell anypony, you already know it anyways in the [REDACTED] year relation to yours that makes you older than me and younger than Celly...
DeleteYour parents were very nice
Delete*sniff* just...don't...I don't want to think about...*ahem, well I need to leave, goodbye.
DeleteGoodbye luna! *hugs*
DeleteOr just because that's too late? xD
ReplyDeleteGroup hug!
ReplyDelete*flies up*
Delete*hugs yay~*
DeleteYour loss
Delete*hug*
Delete*hug*
DeleteHughughughughughughug
ReplyDeletesuper duper migrane powers go!
ReplyDeleteHey toku!
DeleteGreat i made Luna cry, my wolves will not howl tonight
ReplyDeleteSo whatt'd i miss?
ReplyDeleteO,0
You do that for us Victory? Thank you Victory, you're awesome!
ReplyDeleteNice OC Travis!
Good night everypony!
*group hug*
Your welcome xD
DeleteNight! O,0
Delete*yawn*
ReplyDeleteNight again Flare.
ReplyDeleteXD every time i come on luna leaves at the same time
ReplyDeleteWell, thats why we have a schedule.
DeleteSorry lost wifi,
ReplyDeleteHi and bye Flare
Goodnight luna and flare!
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ReplyDeleteI might as well go back to my capital Salvation,(Steel Empire capital)
ReplyDeleteGood night yall
Bye travis!
DeleteWhat's going on? O.0
ReplyDeleteNopony wants to catch me up?
DeleteO.0
*sigh*
ReplyDeletelater travis.
(why is everypony leaving?)
cuz im cursed XD
DeleteAre you now.
DeleteHrrmmm.
ReplyDeleteWell now im going to get off to i guess. Nopony seems to wanna talk...
Ill just say bye to who i think may still be on:
Bye sunset om hover and rainbowdash!
Ill turn skype on.
._. My Wi-fi... it died.
ReplyDeleteMeep.
ReplyDelete*curls up into tiny ball and rolls around*
ReplyDeleteThat is silly adorable.
ReplyDeleteGoodnight you all
......wtf? im watching the mlp episode that is suppose to come out saturday?
ReplyDeletehttp://www.livestream.com/micthemicrophonezero
ReplyDeletedang that was a good episode
ReplyDelete